The four essays I read weren't boring at all because they talked about a lot of different things and I feel like mine is boring. I don't write down my writing but I feel like it needs a little more flavor. When I edit my draft, I will add more details and explain why they are important. I'm also going to write more about the tone of the article because now I realize that humor plays a very big role in "The Death of the Funeral Industry." I talked about it in my draft, but it needs to be explained more why it's important because I don't think it's very