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  • Essay / EVO:The Story - 1439

    Dot, the main character lives in an orb colony with her best friend Pedor. One day he sees this light and after being lifted for a second he evolves. He starts to panic so he hides near the shore, near a rock. One day he returns to the village to find everyone screaming and his best friend Pedor destroying and eating the colony. Dot: What's happening! Pedor: What's happening? I don't want to hear it! You weren't there, you weren't there when I turned into that monster! I was alone, an outcast, everyone hated me, I thought I could have gone to my friend but you weren't there, little piece of... Dot: Yo man, chill, I ran away because I have changed. If you were brothers, you know that I would not have left you. I didn't know what the colony would think, what they would say, how you would react, you know what I say in Pedor: Oh so that's how it is huh? Really funny, I thought we were brothers! You know me! I wouldn't do that to you, what the... you know what, forget it man. I was right, I'm alone. (Runs away to continue terrifying the village) Dot: Wait! Stop! (pursues him) Eat spinach and get stronger. Dot follows the trail of destruction and finds her friend. Pedor: Are you still there? Hmp, I always knew you were a follower, I thought you were different but no, you're just like everyone else. All you want is to fit in, to be like everyone else, but now you can't do it anymore, now that you're a monster, just like me... Dot: (he lets a few tears fall, tries to stay tough, suddenly throws a punch at him) Pedor: Really dude, ok let's go (Gut punches him) Dot: (grabs his shoulders and knees him in the face) (They both get down hand when Dot counters and holds Pedor by the neck) Dot: It doesn't have to be like that, like a... middle of paper...... I can't wait for mother nature to get her hands on you because karma hurts, and you have a lot of it "Thousands of years have passed. Dot, Clay and Woo one day separated to live their own lives when the world evolved. More and more people of their kind appeared, so soon they each started their own families and their ancestors spread all over the world and each created their own families their own families and so on. Over the years, their species was named Homo-Sapiens, aka humans. Humans have become smarter and more competent over the years, but they currently find themselves in a crisis, even though they have done many things that have improved the world. It's not enough, because in doing so, they are slowly destroying their world unless they stop it. -FINWorks cited http://humanorigins.si.edu/evidence/human-family-tree https://www.youtube.com/watch? v=goLyhtq_Vko https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SkgYoTH3Xlc